split into two paragraphs, dropped the remaining dash, and corrected the schooling detail: gestalterische bms (not vorbildung/foundation year) came before architecture studies at ost and hslu.
dropped the weight-of-a-material-vs-weight-of-a-social-crisis parallel and the sciences-meet-and-must-become-real ending — too directly translated from the english original, reads try-hard in german. keeps the same facts and the core point about architecture sitting between disciplines, phrased more plainly.